can sum1 write me a verse....

by **848lu** » Nov 27th, '06, 11:41

im making a track about all the backstabbers....so if anyone feels they wanna say suttin ...plese feel free.....i will upload the beat and show you what im doing...peace

by **TheWeirdoIsBack** » Nov 27th, '06, 14:27

This knife in the back
Was no accident
These mother-fuckin' back-stabbers
Are we what call re-habers
The snakes in the grass
Will bite you on your ass
They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong

Not sure how well it'll fit in to the beat but there's some shit to work with anyway. You need anymore hit me up.

by **C-Game** » Nov 27th, '06, 18:03

wat kinda stuff do uwant
i mean the lenght and stuff

by **sneekykiddo** » Nov 27th, '06, 18:18

Yeah those backstabbers, double-crossers
You can spot them from the corners of your eyes, surprise
Look twice sometimes its your homie, your family
A brother, or a father who's just another liar
Yeah the fire starters - tellin everbody bout your life
And your dirty secrets - its like you've been raped with a knife
The lies going on around you aint really nice
You think its all sugar and spice aye well youre wrong
Just look around you and you'll see that all along
You dont belong in this joint youre all alone
Cuz everybody's doing the best they can
Making plans to backstab each other
The crueller the better
Yeah its just the way that life goes
It will never stop yeah bitch everyone knows.

by **Coccoa** » Nov 27th, '06, 19:33

How much u pay for ghostwriting?

by **Coccoa** » Nov 27th, '06, 22:41

G_killa wrote:il get ya after i finish writing detox for dre

So u the fucking reason it never releases...

by **sneekykiddo** » Nov 28th, '06, 14:12

Coccoa wrote:
G_killa wrote:il get ya after i finish writing detox for dre

So u the fucking reason it never releases...

LAUGH OUT FUCKING LOUD!!! Hahaha

by **AspirinE** » Nov 28th, '06, 14:17

Whats "detox"?

by **Coccoa** » Nov 28th, '06, 19:12

ASP wrote:Whats "detox"?

Rehabitation center for crack addicts.

G_Killa wrote:no dre is a lazy ass producer/recorder. i wrote him 167 tracks already he recorded 2

2??? He is actually hardworking, he usually records a hook only and a hell yeah.

by **848lu** » Nov 29th, '06, 01:09

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:This knife in the back
Was no accident
These mother-fuckin' back-stabbers
Are we what call re-habers
The snakes in the grass
Will bite you on your ass
They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong

that sounds that suttin that i would write...

They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong
this line sounds very nice ... sounds suttin that pitbull would write

sneekykiddo wrote:You think its all sugar and spice aye well youre wrong
Just look around you and you'll see that all along
You dont belong in this joint youre all alone
Cuz everybody's doing the best they can
Making plans to backstab each other
The crueller the better
Yeah its just the way that life goes
It will never stop yeah bitch everyone knows.

^^ that sounds really deep.... thanks yall im gonna upload the beat and see what yall think...peace
:flower:

by **Jdogg06** » Nov 29th, '06, 01:51

they say there, there for the long run
they say they got ur back cuz there the strong one,
u learn there really weak they turn the other cheek
and it feels like the world ends when u learn ur buddy fucked ur girl friend
when they stab u in the back its hard to get back on track
when u wanna forive them they do it again
but fuck it the world dont stop for just one friend
cuz they aint true them nigga's love to play with u
but fuck it i dont need them to proceed
but ive been stabed so much im startin to bleed

not sure if thats what ur lookin for but just posted it n e way

by **TheWeirdoIsBack** » Nov 30th, '06, 03:59

848lu wrote:
TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:This knife in the back
Was no accident
These mother-fuckin' back-stabbers
Are we what call re-habers
The snakes in the grass
Will bite you on your ass
They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong

that sounds that suttin that i would write...

They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong
this line sounds very nice ... sounds suttin that pitbull would write

Heh heh...thanks. If you need anymore tell me I'll be happy to spit some more.

by **848lu** » Dec 1st, '06, 15:06

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:
848lu wrote:
TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:This knife in the back
Was no accident
These mother-fuckin' back-stabbers
Are we what call re-habers
The snakes in the grass
Will bite you on your ass
They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong

that sounds that suttin that i would write...

They don't stay loyal for long
Don't trust 'em, they always do you wrong
this line sounds very nice ... sounds suttin that pitbull would write

Heh heh...thanks. If you need anymore tell me I'll be happy to spit some more.

yea man go for it i like the way it flows....propz g

by **848lu** » Dec 1st, '06, 17:48

yeah....is that a hint lol

can sum1 write me a verse....

can sum1 write me a verse....

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