Homage to a dead friend

[Katerankina]

a friend of mine died recently and i wrote this soon afta:

I can feel my fone ringin again
And as alwayz it's gunna be my best friend
But today he's feelin like life's a bitch
Cuz his and my friend'l lyin dead in a ditch
They were drivin too fast
Didn't wanna be last
But they ended up crashed
Both car and bodies got smashed
Now I got one dead friend friend
From goin too fast round a bend
And the other knocked out cold
From tryin to be too bold
So listen up good
Like you know that you should
Don't try too hard to get ahead
Or you might just end up dead!

R.I.P Maccy J.

[C-Game]

nice and touchin

God bless her

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

deap stuff..........rip to your freind

[Kez]

Flow was alright
Lyrically it was pretty bad if i'm honest

I know the subject is a touchy thing, so that will often make people just notice what it's about, but lyrically it needs work.

No offence. Still sorry about your loss.