Yo, just wrote this, and was wondering what ppl though about it, so go ahead read it and tell me what ya think.
My life was over even before it began
It ended the day I saw the pigs and ran
And I never had the chance to show who I am
They took one look at me and decided not to give a damn
And now they keep reminding me I
Criminal, Just something I wrote.
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Criminal, Just something I wrote.
by rap_gurl » Dec 6th, '06, 22:36
"I do say things that I think will shock people. But I don't do things to shock people. I'm not trying to be the next Tupac, but I don't know how long I'm going to be on this planet. So while I'm here, I might as well make the most of it."
-- Eminem
-- Eminem
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by rap_gurl » Dec 7th, '06, 19:12
what no one has a comment come on ppl.
"I do say things that I think will shock people. But I don't do things to shock people. I'm not trying to be the next Tupac, but I don't know how long I'm going to be on this planet. So while I'm here, I might as well make the most of it."
-- Eminem
-- Eminem
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by Rae » Dec 7th, '06, 21:31
yeah i like it ... it rhymed good ... etc ...
it was nice and deep
keep it up ...
it was nice and deep
keep it up ...
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