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Just A Verse

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Just A Verse

Postby Kez » Dec 11th, '06, 18:27

This is some verse i wrote for my last collab with MoBrat for his CD.
Don't mind the length, the beat and the way MoBrat's organized it has a weird structure.

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Humanity? You kiddin me? This is more like a few planets, three
Smashing into each other having debris through 'em franticly!
We've become civilized, specially when we run with our guys
And scare these motherfuckers off when they see blood in your eyes!
But as the police force got better the obese lords got letters
Giving them a bigger payrise, they celebrate with cheese or with lettuce
He just'll forget it, cause that's how we solve problems these days
Asking for peace that just isn't coming, no matter how often we pray!
Emcees fight me but they empty, bite me
None of you are worth my time, only Enimee might see
There's no difference if you attempt to beat me, i'll fill you with contempt and eat the
Motherfucker who thinks he's better cause he's been on MTV, see!
What more can i say? I'm a whore and i'm gay
Go to the store in the day and buy a dildo, be naughty, ha hey!
I fill this track with shit that kills it back
Sends it to hell with my rap, a message that chills it's pack
Of demons, till they realise they wack and scream it
To the sky or whatever they have till they cause a heart attack and seizure
To that bastard Jesus, i kick you with these words till you crawl in a vent
This is just my thoughts, except it's been scrawled with a pen!
Listen to this in order again, and it'll be clearer than water and penzoil
Which is actually misleading, cause it's water but covered in ten
Gallons of black, so you can't tell what it is, that describes me well
Fuck a record label, this rap should get me signed to hell!

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And yeah, no criticising because of it dissing some random person, as that was the type of track this song is, as Enimee has the first verse and sent it to me, and i wrote to the song so i could base my verse off the topic. So no crit for that fact.
Last edited by Kez on Dec 11th, '06, 20:38, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby C-Game » Dec 11th, '06, 19:27

nothin to critisize man
thr was some heavey words and i liked it
good verse
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