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Life's a bitch...

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Life's a bitch...

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Dec 14th, '06, 02:39

[verse 1]
Woke up this morning feeling like shit
I ain't got much to do feelin this is it
I try and talk to you but you don't say a thing
All you fuckin care about is all your new bling-bling
I feel like I can't go on living this lie
Still deciding whether to live or just die

[Chorus]
Its like you have an itch you just can't scratch
Its like you just want to light up a match
And put an end to all just cause you ain't rich
Well my friend, life's a bitch

[Verse 2]
I can't believe single thing that you ever said
Probably because you just fucked my best friend dead
All my friends have been lieing to me this whole time
I've been thinkin about just buying me a .9
Click click boom boom BANG you fuckers dead
Guess what your next, turn your fuckin head

[Chorus 2X]


Just a lil somethin somethin...I get bored. What y'all think? I know its kinda short so...you can just leave that out.
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Postby aiden669 » Dec 14th, '06, 03:56

thats pretty good... hmmm 8/10 :8)
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Postby Shady727 » Dec 14th, '06, 04:25

Good. Better than anything I could ever write.
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