i wrote something :O

[MuNxMuN]

what would you do if you were all alone
no one to help you
no place to call home
would you just give up and end your life
or would you strive to get out of this mess
so you don't have to endure anymore pain
and have the chance to reobtain what had
and not be alone in this world anymore
so things would be the same as they were before
you decided to run from the people who cared about you
over a small issue that wasn't even true

[hook]
life is full of ups n downs
put regrets aside and forget all the sad times you've had
instead hold on to the fun and joyful times
the ones you want to remember for the rest of your life


there's gonna be more to this but i just wanna see if it's good or not so far

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice its good words rythming needs work but thats kool coz your awesome

[C-Game]

yea good concept
rhymin is not thr but meanin is thr