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A Hangover I Don't Deserve

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A Hangover I Don't Deserve

Postby shady_babii3 » Dec 18th, '06, 06:11

I wake up with a headache that just wont go away.

Echos still remaining from the party yesterday.

Whats with all these bottles? Whats wrong with my head?

Whos this fat guy laying here beside me in my bed?

Who are all these people passed out on my floor?

Whats inside these brownies that keeps me wanting more?

What did I do last night? I cant remember much.

Ive got a fucking headache that an asprin couldnt touch.

I barely put my dip in. With every step I swirve.

Feels like Im on a hangover that I dont deserve.

Im feeling really dizzy. Im in some kind of daze.

I whisper to myself its gonna be one of those days.

My day is gonna suck shit. I have to go to work.

Im in a really bad mood and Im feelin like a jerk.

I guess Ill call the dollar store and call in sick today

and get in bed and go to sleep till my hangover goes away.
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Postby C-Game » Dec 18th, '06, 17:50

yea nice
i like it tooo
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 18th, '06, 18:29

Sounds nice , good work.


But, all hang overs are well deserved. :D
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Postby 4D » Dec 18th, '06, 18:33

That`s cool, nice concept

Whats with all these bottles? Whats wrong with my head?

Whos this fat guy laying here beside me in my bed?

Who are all these people passed out on my floor?

Whats inside these brownies that keeps me wanting more?


^That's great!! :D

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Postby Inzanity » Dec 18th, '06, 18:33

ASP wrote:Sounds nice , good work.


But, all hang overs are well deserved. :D


:laughing: anyway nice shit shady I like it ur pretty good at written poems and I found this one kind of funny the whole concept of it and all and about fat guy lying next to u LMAO good work on this
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