ASP wrote:now my lines combined like mines on a beat that chimes
this is hypnotizing hip hop rise upon the bi bop
a dont stop or flop or drop a grow better like a crop
I Like the rhymes even decent on the mutis but the punchlines somewhat dont impress..
I mean, people listen to raps for dope ass punchlines..
try balancing flow/punchlines and multis
but i like it, im just saying that to be honest, so u know what others think u should improve.
thanx man , thats the sorta feed i need
i been just concentrating on rythming and multis lately imma start on punchlines aswell lol
