A Valentines Day rhyme (Poem), Wrote this for my wife.

[4D]

I`ve always wanted to write something meaningful about my family, this is not my first effort, but, it`s the first time a rhyme has actually been o.k enough to show to her.


To Lisa
I`ll try n scribe a rhyme to describe inside how I’m
feelin about you,
And how I hide da side who`d die if i`d to survive
dealin without you.
Bein about you, i`d have to mention your smile and how
lovin you`s simple,
Every time you smile I giggle and your 2 dimples
gimme goose pimples.
A relationship built on communication, patience,
love and lust,
For two lives to combine and thrive all the
Above`s a must
And yes honesty’s the best policy, 10 years have
Flew by collecting few lies
True beauty lies in your blonde hair & blue eyes, like
Cool ice reflecting blue skies.
But, times can be hard, with work, bills & stress, it can be
A pretty gritty life,
But, it’s cancelled out when you`ve the love and support of
A pretty little wife.
My best friend, but, you’re more than a chum, you`re an
Adorable Mum.
You`re very happy changing nappies, don`t even turn your
Nose from the bum.
Your notable glum, every time I insist that we keep
The count at three,
You’d have ten or twenty more, that’d be plenty sore
Bound to be.
I wanna save you the pain and save us the strain
`cause three’s perfect
Jordan, Stacey & Scott amaze me lots, their cuteness
Has me perplexed.

Poor Jordan spends the whole mornin’ ignorin` warnin’s,
The crazy lil rebel,
A human dynamo, a ball of energy, mixture of sonic &
The Tasmanian devil.
But, he’s bein’ great at school lately and hopefully forever in
Our praises he’ll revel.
Wee Stacey scares me ‘cause she’s a little dainty,
I hope she’s o.k.
Walkin’ & talkin’ now, repeatin’ words so watch out, not much
She won’t say,
She told me the other day “Fuck off You!”. No wonder
I`m goin’ grey.
Then there’s little Scottie like a little “Rocky”, ask for
A hug and he slaps you
He’s lovely & cute, but, he’ll probably be a brute or
A thug with tattoo’s.
He’s as hard as nails, he fell down the stairs, got up
And laughed too!
And I’m no hero, but, I swear I’d never let anything happen ye
Without givin’ my life,
I’d dive into a hail of bullets or storm a burning’ building
To save my kids or my wife.
I don`t know the meaning of life, but I know ye bring
Meaning to mine,
In you & my kids I found what I always wanted and was
Seeking to find,
A perfect family, I couldn`t improve on any of you, even if
Each was designed.
Well, I’m after havin’ my say on Valentines Day and this is where it
Ceases, signed………

[4D]

Thanks man, that was a quick response, cool!!

It`s a lot harder to write or post rhymes like this, so any comments are appreciated!

[Ivy]

I wish my man would do something like that for me..that was so sweet

[4D]

Thanks, well, my wife would be the first to say i`m not romantic, guess this kind of get`s me off the hook for a while. We`re together 10 years and this is the first time i`ve done this, so give it time, he might surprise you!!

At G Killa, thanks man for readin it twice, that`s great. I usually don`t have the patience to read a rhyme once, lol!

[MuNxMuN]

that was really sweet a lot of guys wouldn't even bother to attempt to write a poem

[4D]

Thanks for all the comments, it`s very appreciated!!

[Inzanity]

that was really seet I like it

[ThomasAguanis]

wow. that was great. you really did get your feelings out in it. your wife must have loved it

[C-Game]

some nice words thr
the way u hv used simplicity and all da sweet words in one poem to express ur love is wonderful.
i like da parts whr ur actually describin ur kids
nice way to put it man

[4D]

some nice words thr
the way u hv used simplicity and all da sweet words in one poem to express ur love is wonderful.
i like da parts whr ur actually describin ur kids
nice way to put it man

Thanks for your nice comments man, appreciate what you're sayin!!