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it's my time to speak (pissed)

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it's my time to speak (pissed)

Postby stevethetruth » Dec 19th, '06, 03:20

Verse 1:
You ever wake up and realize life sucks
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Postby Steve Spag » Dec 19th, '06, 06:34

That's really good man. Deep shit. Keep it up. I'll look forward to reading some more.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 19th, '06, 16:14

lol thanks a lot dude yeah most of it was coming from the heart
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 19th, '06, 18:43

bump!
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 19th, '06, 19:05

U think ur life sucks? :unsure:
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 19th, '06, 19:48

Coccoa wrote:U think ur life sucks? :unsure:

no i don't i was just fed up at the time
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 20th, '06, 02:21

come on !!!! FEEDBACK!!
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Postby Aft3rmath » Dec 20th, '06, 02:51

Thats my Boy steve, thats right you better believe/ he is the way free style weaves, the in-and out's, he always win theres' no doubt/ the minute you step up you get shut out, so listen now, open your ears, steve is one of your worst fears, watch as he throws you down, while he looks at you on the ground cryn, wondering why you such a fuckign clown, dyin.

Nice steve just a little verse to keep away the shit talkers. lol it sux but you know me. :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 20th, '06, 02:56

Aft3rmath wrote:Thats my Boy steve, thats right you better believe/ he is the way free style weaves, the in-and out's, he always win theres' no doubt/ the minute you step up you get shut out, so listen now, open your ears, steve is one of your worst fears, watch as he throws you down, while he looks at you on the ground cryn, wondering why you such a fuckign clown, dyin.

Nice steve just a little verse to keep away the shit talkers. lol it sux but you know me. :D


haha thanks for the feed and dude that verse was pretty sick
you better start writing a song with me SOON lol
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