Random Thoughts

[Steve Spag]

Just spitting random thoughts, diggin' through my brain//
Exploring my dome, crossing the border to insane//
Got this anger built-up and I wanna break it down//
Wanna end it all, make a fall, leave without a sound//
Forget about my name 'cause I don't wanna go on//
I wanna make the right decision 'cause I'm tired of going wrong//
So this is what I do, just spit out my emotions//
'Cause I got so damn much it could fill a thousand oceans//
But still they would flood because there's just too much//
And I'm trying to outrun them so I'm releasing the clutch//
But they catch up easily and they ain't goin' away//
So I just sit back and cry, get on my knees and begin to pray//
Make this depression fade, I've been suffering long enough//
Sick of people putting me down saying that I ain't tough//
Well no one knows me, not even myself//
Got the goal of putting The Way I Feel mixtape on the shelf//
'Cause I've been spitting out my heart, putting my soul in every verse//
They say my gift isn't a gift, it's actually just a curse//
And this curse of rap has changed me and I don't know what to do//
But I'm actually kinda enjoying it 'cause the words come easy to spew//
Just appearing at the brain when I wanna open my mouth//
And after I'm done rocking the Northeast I'm headed to the South//
Showing all my talent because this is real to me//
And if this really is a curse, God, please don't be healin' me//
'Cause the day that I ain't writing is the day I drop and die//
And if you don't believe that truth just take a look deep in my eye//
'Cause if you really know me, there wouldn't be a doubt//
That these verses that I spit is all that I'm about//
It's all that I live for, just give me a topic and I'll spit//
Because I got the intellegence so I just don't give a shit//
I'm ignoring everyone else, if you wanna judge me, say something//
Steve Spag is here forever and I ain't backing down for nothing//

Let me know what y'all think please.
And don't forget to check out my music at http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag

Thanks.

[D@vid]

i liked it.i'm sure others won't.

[meinem]

i been into rap all my life right from the roots and i hopin to start ma own label fully soon and after reading thru your verse this is my thoughts

its got a nice feel to it well worded and got potential but in order for it to flow with a little more smoothness it needs a little alteration to a couple of the lines.

apart from that its a great start maybe you should write a few more verses to go with it and see what happenes.

there be a lot of peeps on here that will probs slag ya for it cuz its not complexed enough ect... but a good verse dont need to be complexed it needs to say clearly what its about and have a great flow to it and your verse aint far off it

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feedback guys, I appreciate it.

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check out some your songs.... didnt really like any of them , you say your self your biggest influence is eminem and you sound like him recycled in some of them, keep working on it though production is tight as fuck , and you got some nice lines your flow could improve but so could everyones...keep doing what ya doing