frozen moment - poem

[ShadyAngel]

i write a lot but i often run out of things to write about when im not depressed. anyone got any tips? heres one of my poems

frozen moments
lost in time
much time has passed
since he was mine

i thougt we'd last
so did you
but thats all changed
and we are through

i should have seen it
i should have tryed
searched alot deeper
uncovered his lies

he said he was working
whenever i called
he sed they were mates
and that was all

i dont want this
to happen to you
the love of your life
ditches you

so shield your soul
guard your heart
till u find a guy
who wont tear them apart

a man who will hold you
when times get rough
and saying i love you
is more than enough.

[Inzanity]

I love it. It's so cute and sad aww it remind's me of my ex

[ShadyAngel]

thanks huni. i was quite sad when i wrote it too just split up with my ex n he was cheetin on me with 3 othe girls... i was so pissed wit him lol.

[Kojack]

let me write you a poem

till 9 o clock my nine's gonn be on fire
i can't wait more now i'm wearin' my bulletproof vest
You'll se a SYNDICATE tatoo on my bottom of my hand
no rhymes no kicks just i'm high on drugs
i pop a lot of shit, i'm so crazy for you
i'll wait till 12 o clock and i'mma go to find you
fuck these sad, love poems, i'll do it my way
see me on a corner loadin' on my AK
double Syndicate chains, you know 3 G3s
5 MP5s, i smoke this shit up the LSD can do nothing

here's a nice poem

not your sad, love poems

[Kojack]

thanks huni. i was quite sad when i wrote it too just split up with my ex n he was cheetin on me with 3 othe girls... i was so pissed wit him lol.

no fuck

[Inzanity]

no fuck

ur weird

[Kojack]

I were always

i never liked love poems

Ps you wrote a good love poem, but idon't like love poems

[Jacklynn]

ShadyAngel Great! I like your poem! Post one more!

[ShadyAngel]

i have a couple i will post them all. hope u like them

[C-Game]

wow its cute girl