I love her

[Semper Fidelis]

The first thing that goes to my mind is you
I can't sleep because of my though
Don't think i am a foool
I just told you i like you
And you react like your cold
I like you and you don't like me?
I'm 17 your 16 that ain't to old?
Just listen to me and see
My heart ain't fillin of hate
It is just fillin of love and i like it
When i am with you i sweat, and losing weight

I like to express this don't now what else to do
She can't read it so won't hear it
I had to share it, tell it, and be with
You

[ShadyAngel]

aww thats a sweet poem well done hun

[C-Game]

yea Semper kool stuff
check in for da tourney

[Semper Fidelis]

Well thank you

[Enimee]

it suuuuucked.....siiiike it was iight keep at it

[Kojack]

hmm

Good Work

[Semper Fidelis]

it suuuuucked.....siiiike it was iight keep at it

What particulairy sucked, i don't have anything about your opinion with a argument my friend. Thank for taking time to read it.

[Mc Cubz]

good work man the words are real, im feeling them.

duno if its lyrics or just a poem, either way keep working!

and dont listen to the criticism - wht u wrote are deep feelings, and you shouldnt change your feelings jus cos sumone didnt like them!

[Enimee]

nah it was good...write longer shit do my man like 4 real i don like readin dem der short ass posts...oh an MERRY CHRISTMAS...........peep me if ne one lookin ta battle inthe next hr

[Semper Fidelis]

good work man the words are real, im feeling them.

duno if its lyrics or just a poem, either way keep working!

and dont listen to the criticism - wht u wrote are deep feelings, and you shouldnt change your feelings jus cos sumone didnt like them!

Ok thank you i will!

[Inzanity]

nice and deep good shit