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Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 26th, '06, 21:41

um... what u on because ive become dumb
somethings wrong but im lost n i dont know how come
i just want to be one to adjust to get across this long slump
i am stumpped, dump my thoughts off
im a washed up punk who loves hip hop
once others jumped on my jock but now its switched up
pick up from where i kicked dust
meanin when i went gone for almost a year
theres tear drops out my eye ducts
i swear im fucked cuz i looked in the mirror n my sight does disgust
was it lust, the reason why i cared so much about this job
n plus a lot corrupt since i disappeared
i trusted my peers but many nightmares pushed us to the rear of our construction i fear
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Postby Kojack » Dec 26th, '06, 21:57

Sorry KDoG but... you needa lot of work

your name reminds me a member here in TR named k block
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Re: what u on

Postby Mc Cubz » Dec 27th, '06, 01:49

KDoG wrote:um... what u on because ive become dumb
somethings wrong but im lost n i dont know how come
i just want to be one to adjust to get across this long slump
i am stumpped, dump my thoughts off
im a washed up punk who loves hip hop
once others jumped on my jock but now its switched up
pick up from where i kicked dust
meanin when i went gone for almost a year
theres tear drops out my eye ducts
i swear im fucked cuz i looked in the mirror n my sight does disgust
was it lust, the reason why i cared so much about this job
n plus a lot corrupt since i disappeared
i trusted my peers but many nightmares pushed us to the rear of our construction i fear


pretty good dat kdog :worship:
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Postby Mc Cubz » Dec 27th, '06, 01:50

Kojack wrote:Sorry KDoG but... you needa lot of work

your name reminds me a member here in TR named k block


kdog was one of the old school rappers of tr, here nearlly a year before kblock came on the tr scene jus bin busy wid army things dats y his post count is low he aint new
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Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 27th, '06, 08:25

Kojack, I was just screwing around there to prove I can still maneuver around a bit, that was just an exercise I do before I start the real thing
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Postby Rae » Dec 27th, '06, 09:36

well i actually thought that was kinda good.

i've def. seen betta from u :)

but if u say this is just a warm up then thats good!

keep it up kidd ;)
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