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Strong Feelins

Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '06, 02:58

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Im gettin strong feelins for dis woman
but im still broken like this one guitar string im strummin
a lil out spoken mics floatin on its own and im wonderin
if love can keep me goin keep my blood flowin
or do the oppisite and my body stop growin...

verse1
i think my feelins are gettin a lil too strong
but this chick makes me feel like i can do no wrong
and i know its wrong to keep up tis ficade
its a fake life i live i should get down wit god
but for now im fallin back takin a break
because im gettin strong feelins dont know how much i can take
im still weak from the last time i got tore apart
my mind speaks out all the time cause of ma sore heart
but maybe this time will be a tad different
maybe itll work out cause we both like spittin then
we could get famous be together for ever
naw im ignoramous it wouldnt happen never...

chorus

verse2
so now im stuck between a rock and a hard place
still hidin in the dark cause of my scarred face
i know i cant continue on this open venue
but i can change my menue this girl has me mendin
my wounds to quick i might get sick
wit love is this a blessin from above is this
jus a message from my last love that its
ok to move on wit my life n stop bein so cold
alones not a feelin i want so ill nock bein this bold
sympathy isnt my best attribute you know that
apathy's easier but i wont still do that
its to hard but yeah im gettin strong feelins
this chicks perfection has me down and reelin

chorus

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Postby MoBrat » Dec 28th, '06, 03:02

props very deep and good flow :worship:
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Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '06, 03:03

thanks man
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Postby Rae » Dec 28th, '06, 03:24

hmmm i love it!

very deep ;)

nice rhymes nice flow etc ... tha works lol :D

I wanna hear an audio of it ;)
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Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '06, 03:26

may b :P
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 28th, '06, 03:27

dude i def gotta hear the audio and how it panns out

overall sick song i thought it was really deep

loving the flow too

:worship: keep it up dude
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Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '06, 03:28

yeah no prob bout to get another one wrote so open your eyes
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Postby ShadyAngel » Dec 28th, '06, 15:16

yeah i thought it was good to, i wanna no the audios aswell :P
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