can't Replace this Ace

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 2nd, '07, 21:37

it's Day-In-Day-Out-We-Will-Tame-Rymes-Act-Up-With-1/
I'm Staying- Play-Mouths-Equal-Slain-Lines-Thats-What-It-Becomes//

Feel,-Come-Forth-With-It-,Try-Persist-2-Never-Give-In/
a Real-Metamorphasis,-I-Insist-U-Better-Live,-Begin//

I-Defy-Rules-Here,-One-Things-True-We-Create-New-Intentional-Emotions/
Eyes-Cry-Cool-Tears-Nothings-New,-Free-Key-Relate-Thru-Conventional-Posting//

I-Swear-This,-I-Guess-It's-Help,-Fights-Allow-,So-Type-Clear-A-Essence/
Reply-Where-Is-My-Presence-Felt,-Right-Now,-Right-Here-Tha-Present//

Mention-Pain,-A-Law-Says-Fools-Sin,-Crime-Taints-Growth-Understand,-Hear-This-Tension/
Attention-Gained,-Tha-Losses-Duel-Wins,-Time-Paints-Oaths-And-Lyric-Redemption//

1-Top-Restore-This-Crown-TR-Tha-Royal-Place-Reply-Not-In-Text-Tests/
Some-Stop-Before-It's-Found-We-Star-A-Loyal-Face-My-Forgotten-Next-Request//

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 2nd, '07, 23:21

dam your rythming is some crazy shit there, awesoem man :8)

itd be good to here it flowed, great work man

also sorry id dint see it before lol

by **Rae** » Jan 3rd, '07, 01:52

daaaaaaaaaaaang ... that was good!

kinda like bar said ... tha rhyming couldnt be n e betta
it had great flow too

keep it up!

by **C-Game** » Jan 3rd, '07, 08:30

hey brother u got some of da best multies on TR
nice stuff u hv

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 3rd, '07, 21:07

Tahnx 4 all tha feedback I'll return tha favor when I can

Dam I wish I could drop like this all tha time

Uppin 4 more feed

by **C-Game** » Jan 4th, '07, 18:45

Rain Matrix wrote:Tahnx 4 all tha feedback I'll return tha favor when I can

Dam I wish I could drop like this all tha time

Uppin 4 more feed

kool dat u replied in a normal way he he
normally its a rhymin reply u do

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