5minute spurt

[xariuss]

his dicks disappearing
your fearing, every word that comes out-of-his-mouth
like you just mounted-the-dought
that your gunna get your ass-kicked down-at-the-south
Down at the south?, i've been missplaced
im so pissed i can't pick which-face, a case of split-face
so dictate-this,
FUCK YOU, suck my dick and squeeze my balls you pig-faced-bitch.
So when you see me -kick-your-ass
and split-your-past
kill you at spawn along with your dick-less-dad
"that doesn't make sense, how can he be dick-less"
"when he he manifested a emotionless renengade which is me in these pictures"
These bitches have been burned at birth
burned a church
superman, over-turned the turf
with you stink ass on it
don't touch me im clinically haunted
my mentality is dis-torted
along with these boats full of illegal asians been de-ported..


What ya think?? took me about 5minutes to accumilate, some mixtape song inspired me to do this.. called "frontpage stardom"

[xariuss]

meh...

[xariuss]

sucks i guess... some criticism would be good to...??

[AspirinE]

if its one of ur first rhymes its ok

u didnt put much sense in it though
and MORE complexity