short verse in progress/ feed please

[Rain Matrix]

I'm Bizzack Back 2 Bizz
With Facts I make Rap my Bitch
no 1 This Exact u just Act It
Sit Class yor Slacking
so just Wish That my Attack Miss
but It's Intact so Relax Kid
Make Way or Stay Fake
no Mistake Play I Relay 2 Break
Minds and Thoughts u Ought 2 Find
Time is Forgot u Opt 4 Designs
yur Behind Distraught Caught by Mine

I'll Tell u in Advance
don't Dwell on yur Chance
I'll send yur Plans 2 Hell
I can make Demands as Well

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

Not bad, I like it for only a couple lines. But, it is only a couple lines. Overall 7/10, probably a 9 for the potential of a full-length (did I word that right?).

[Inzanity]

not bad but it must be a really short verse that ur working on