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wrote this in like 8 minutes idk what i was thinking lol

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wrote this in like 8 minutes idk what i was thinking lol

Postby stevethetruth » Jan 20th, '07, 03:20

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Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Jan 20th, '07, 12:11

awsome!!! you have a weird way of writting your stuff, that's what's good about you ;) it makes the lyrics sound good, and it has a good flow to it as well, nice job :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 20th, '07, 20:47

ha :D thanks a lot, that mean's a lot to me


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Postby C-Game » Jan 20th, '07, 20:58

kool stuff thr Steve-o
hey bro i didnt rcv ur HOMELESS AGONY poet for da tourney :)
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Postby Rae » Jan 20th, '07, 23:05

that was good hunn ...

it was good when i read it lastnite ... in between our little breaks that we took from our ... "adult fun" :laughing:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 20th, '07, 23:09

Rae wrote:that was good hunn ...

it was good when i read it lastnite ... in between our little breaks that we took from our ... "adult fun" :laughing:

adult fun :shocked: why you leave bar out :'(
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