First Personal Piece // Feed?

[Rain Matrix]

Emergency Surgery this Insurgent B Cursing Keys watch it Fade 2 Black
2 Rehabs in 1 Year U See That not 1 Tear G Had not 1 Fear I Made it Back

my Lungs Hid Shame now my Toungue Spits Flames so Demons See That
Roll tha Dice I Know tha Fight so I Froze my Type Dreaming of Relapse

2 Dope 4 New Hope fuck what U Wrote only 1 True Show so Sacrifice
in All Designs I Call Rymes my Stall Time call that tha Facts Of Life

I Could Care Less I'm not Careless so Meticulous it's Ridiculous
u Should Dare 2 Express 2 they Stare Perplexed it's Hit or Miss

Fame Scars we were Shown r Own Pain is Ours but we've Known tha Throne
tha rap Game is Hard set in Stone like Bones cuz Tame Bars always Roam Home

[MoBrat]

damn i like it it's got great multies, great flow and it's complex the best vocab i've seen in here in awhile...some of it kinda makes me think it's a rap verus but overall it's great

honestly this is the best thing i've seen in creative writing since i've been here