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Postby D@vid » Jan 21st, '07, 07:04

i liked it. and i have heard of ppl reading the dictionary to improve their vocab for rapping, so i suggest u do that. i know em did it when he first started rapping, and look what it did for him.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 21st, '07, 07:07

bestestever202005 wrote:i liked it. and i have heard of ppl reading the dictionary to improve their vocab for rapping, so i suggest u do that. i know em did it when he first started rapping, and look what it did for him.


yeh thats what i did and do, read a dictionary and thesouras...you never read my stuff beore i practiced :sweating: it helps alot but you just got to have alot of patience when writing, but after a while you just remember the words and they come automatically to you :sweating:
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Postby D@vid » Jan 21st, '07, 07:12

yea since i entered the tourney i feel like writing now for some reason.i thought about reading the dict but its too damn big
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 21st, '07, 07:17

bestestever202005 wrote:yea since i entered the tourney i feel like writing now for some reason.i thought about reading the dict but its too damn big


best thing is a thesarous :sweating: i got a dam old one , but if you got cash i think you can get ones were you type in the word and it gives you other options...i got to look through mine although i aint for a bit, i needa revise again lol
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Postby D@vid » Jan 21st, '07, 08:07

Bar wrote:
bestestever202005 wrote:yea since i entered the tourney i feel like writing now for some reason.i thought about reading the dict but its too damn big


best thing is a thesarous :sweating: i got a dam old one , but if you got cash i think you can get ones were you type in the word and it gives you other options...i got to look through mine although i aint for a bit, i needa revise again lol




theres always thesaurus.com and dictionary.com
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Postby 4D » Jan 21st, '07, 11:29

bestestever202005 wrote:


theres always thesaurus.com and dictionary.com


Two of my favourites. Don`t use them as much these days, just if I have a word in my head that rhymes perfecty, then I just check it to make sure it has the appropriate meaning.
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Postby pawel » Jan 21st, '07, 13:43

I'm looking forward to the Audio :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 21st, '07, 16:20

FORDIE wrote:
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theres always thesaurus.com and dictionary.com


Two of my favourites. Don`t use them as much these days, just if I have a word in my head that rhymes perfecty, then I just check it to make sure it has the appropriate meaning.


yeh like i used assosance in a battle coz i thought you drank it.....but its absence you drink :sweating:
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Postby Flamez » Jan 23rd, '07, 04:44

crazy multies man its sick i like it :8)..
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jan 24th, '07, 02:02

:worship: :worship:
thanks everyone.
the audio should come soon..within a week (possibly this week) and it's probally the last you're gonna hear from me solo for a while :shifty:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 24th, '07, 02:09

ThomasAguanis wrote::worship: :worship:
thanks everyone.
the audio should come soon..within a week (possibly this week) and it's probally the last you're gonna hear from me solo for a while :shifty:


0o0oo0o0o0 tommy is working on a tape :wub: lol j/p man :sweating:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jan 24th, '07, 22:08

Bar wrote:0o0oo0o0o0 tommy is working on a tape :wub: lol j/p man :sweating:


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