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Postby Tomega » Oct 16th, '05, 14:08

(Tomega)
Yo i will never get into the GAME
What i do is more SHAME than FAME
It feels like walking a long LANE on a RAINY DAY
Got no-one to BLAME, Like im stupid as RAY-
man, it will never be the SAME
I used to be alive, now im LAME
Like im drowning in the THAMES
But never say i am DEPRESSIVE
Coz that makes me AGRESSIVE
That's why my life aint RAFFISH
Cause no matter how bad i FEEL
Stay REAL, is my SHIELD and my rap-APPEAL
keeps me ALIVE, that's why I'VE
never grabbed a KNIFE and paid my WIFE
To fuck me the rest of my LIFE
nahh that aint my style or the way that i ACT
It's just a fake style, and the matter of FACT
I hate that style, coz it aint the way that i ACT
I like the real style, that is what i PROTECT

(Chorus)
(tomega)
I bet my life aint the same as yours
(darjan333)
But i try to live it good of course
(tomega)
try to make my life better every day
(darjan333)
you do it yours, i do it my way

(Darjan333)
Now it is my turn and my life is easy described-
Many of horrible words can be here ascribed!
But I always trying to do my best-I am cool-vibed!
I am playing some games with God and Devil-
I play hide n seek behind hell
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Postby walend » Oct 16th, '05, 15:12

Cool !! who's producin it?

When it comes out :wink:
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^^^^^^ Basically my intrests
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 16th, '05, 16:07

damn. you both improved a lot. that was hot.
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby Tomega » Oct 16th, '05, 17:11

ThomasAguanis wrote:damn. you both improved a lot. that was hot.


thnx why didnt u write your verse?
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 16th, '05, 22:13

Tomega wrote:
ThomasAguanis wrote:damn. you both improved a lot. that was hot.


thnx why didnt u write your verse?


because about 2 days after i wrote a song darjan pmd me and said for the next song the topic was your life and the song i wrote was about my life so i didnt really have anything to write about and i was gonna pm him back today and say i would do the hook so i didnt not do anything but you posted it up finished.
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Postby Darjan333 » Oct 17th, '05, 19:45

Oh,fuck it,man....
I thought you will not do anything :sweating:
Anyway,we will do more songs!
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 22nd, '05, 15:28

nice rap my n*ggaz
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