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Deep Love (feed please)

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 25th, '07, 04:20

[Verse 1]
I've been crushing on you for awhile just never had the guts to say it
I wish I could just run up to you and tell you without biting my lip
Some have told me that you've liked me too but how can I be sure?
They're just rumors after all
C'mon these people telling me this are all fucking whores
Just spreading things through the hall
Not sure to tell you or keep it to myself, very few people know...
Little do you know I stick up for you when they call you a ho
Until I can swallow the shy and tell you whats on mind when I'm sawing logs
I just let you all guess who I'm talking about through this song

[Chorus]
This song is for all the lovers out there
An anthem for all the people out there
Who can't tell the one they love what they're feelin'
I wrote this so you know what I think and what I'm dealin'
With, but I can't just come out and tell you
But I think you know what I'm saying too

[Verse 2]
Now if your the one I'm writing this about you may know its you
The one that is the subject of the writing, my own you-know-who
And if you are the one I'm writing about
Your lucky
Because I'd turn around and go a different route
Life I guess ain't that sucky
'Cause I got you to make everything right
Your my lamp, my light
When I'm feeling like shit I think of you and it all feels alright...

[Chorus]
This song is for all the lovers out there
An anthem for all the people out there
Who can't tell the one they love what they're feelin'
I wrote this so you know what I think and what I'm dealin'
With, but I can't just come out and tell you
But I think you know what I'm saying too

[Verse 3]
This is the final verse so I'm going to make it good
'Cause I would take a bullet for you while we walking in the 'hood
I know you probably didn't know I could write like this
Probably thought that I can't do shit
But listen I can do a lot you never knew about me
If I could get up the nerve to tell you then you'd see
But until then just take comfort in the lyrics of the song
And just know I'm praying that those rumors aren't wrong

[Chorus 2X]
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Postby sinemm » Jan 25th, '07, 21:23

thats not bad i guess.some nice lines there ;)
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 26th, '07, 00:01

sinemm wrote:thats not bad i guess.some nice lines there ;)


Thanks...I've wanted to do a "real" song like this, but they all ultimately ended with me killing whoever I'm talking about :sweating: but this one worked lol.
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Feb 13th, '07, 21:16

wasabi wrote:thats a really good song did you make this up




I made the lyrics up myself, if thats what you mean. But the emotion and feeling toward who I wrote this to is all real as well.
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