Typing Rhymez..

by **Flamez** » Feb 17th, '07, 20:54

Typing rhymez in Notepad on my pc to lazy to write em' down you see
hearin' music on cd gettin' me singing call me a rapper emcee
killer deadly snake mamba on a mexican mastery lyrical spree
on top of my game taking off to a higher degree leaving debris
without touching you giving you h.i.v. a soldier trained to destroy
deploy recruiters ready to face war battle sendin' home mama's boy
could only be useful for use of a decoy we only want strong men
no crew wants weak members want strong men over and over again
not every now and then only need killer instinct fighters who don't quit
who got that determination to keep going and never give up not one bit
gotta keep going like energizer stayin' steady without throwing a fit
learned that the hard way but i did it conquered on great pace lickety split

feedback appreciated

by **C-Game** » Feb 17th, '07, 20:59

dude im really feelin ur rhymes...
u shld definitly be more active in da rap section
u can tear em up
nice

like da 3rd line

killer deadly snake mamba on a mexican mastery lyrical spree

by **Flamez** » Feb 17th, '07, 21:11

thanx man appreciate tha feed... :happy:

ya i should hehe...

by 4D » Feb 18th, '07, 00:01

C-Game wrote:dude im really feelin ur rhymes...
u shld definitly be more active in da rap section
u can tear em up
nice

like da 3rd line
killer deadly snake mamba on a mexican mastery lyrical spree

Agreed, I've given Flamez props before too, I like his style and choice of words. Keep it up man!! :8)