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[Infliction]

Aint done one in a long time... feedback appreciated..
Goes to the "Poisonious" Instrumental, by Dialated peoples


I aint around to drop no fuckin' crazy hit, im here to drop some crazy shit
This aint a fuckin' rap song iss a mothafuckin' horror flick
Like Snakes on a plane, my mic spits venom out when I rap shit insane
It hears everything I say, so its gone crazy from all the pain
Take a knife to my chest and ingrave my rap name, while wearin' an open vest (Jesus Christ!)
Damn right im a motherfuckin' maniac and I got my rhymes back, now yall hooked like crack
I was told to rhyme with a bit more complexity, so off the bat im facin' a lil more adversity
I went face to face with the mirror and said fuck you to the monstrosity
The reflection grinned back at me, while I kept my face straight
Filled with anger and hate, Im thinkin' in my head that Im just too late
This is my fate g, and that monstrosity is me...

[Rain Matrix]

Not bad, none of tha rymes were really forced but some seemed 2 be, so if yur aim was uppin tha complexity yur starting 2 just keep at it and make it yur own ~1~

[Infliction]

yea i know what you mean, it flows a lot better when its rapped as opposed to read, thanks for the feed

[Infliction]

feed pleaseee

[Flamez]

its good..