almost done just need the 3rd verse..and just making any changes if necessary..yes i'll be doing audio on this ..
tell me what you think so far..
"Please Forgive Me Lord"
By Flamez
[Chorus] x2
please forgive me lord
don't wanna be like this anymore
wanna go back, to how i used to be before
now i feel like i'm being ignored
like evil has been poured inside of me
feel like hardly anyone really loves me
[Verse 1]
lord please forgive me for i'm sorry listen to my common prayers
everywhere i'm at i'm unaware i'm ruining everything nobody cares
tears running down my cheeks hate myself why can't i change
been acting strange feel hate from everyone feel very deranged
i'm out of range an angry demon inside me that i can't control
can't get a hold of myself feel so depressed hurting my own soul
lord give me strength to surpass this blackhole that i'm going deeper in
feel pain inside of me i'm hurting everyone, evertything, everywhere i've been
thinking i'm stupid to begin with, feeling like i've committed more than one sin
no one understands why i been like this but i'm begging for you to forgive me lord
giving up on myself feel like its over feel like quitting feels like i'm being ignored
fallin overboard on a cutting board struck in the heart with a deadly sword
i'm beggin' you for forgiveness, so please forgive me lord
[Chorus] x2
please forgive me lord
don't wanna be like this anymore
wanna go back, to how i used to be before
now i feel like i'm being ignored
like evil has been poured inside of me
feel like hardly anyone really loves me
[Verse 2]
my life full of struggles going up and down
good n' bad days, always comin' year round
quitting falling face flat on the ground
in depression hopes down in tears drowned
with thoughts of suicide inside my head swirling around
hearing voices n' sounds inside my ears since new years
since 2007 began a couple of days later had many fears
felt a family death was near, that had me crying tears
was hard for me, to see my grandpa disappear
but he will always appear deep down inside my heart
everywhere i go by my side never ever breaking apart
on a bad start reminiscing memories, recalling the past
trying to stay positive moving forward at last
i screw up too fast every time for my uncalled for reactions
its my fault for everything because of my stupid actions
causing many distractions making everybody's tempers flare
sometimes i just give up hope, putting myself in despair
[Chorus] x2
please forgive me lord
don't wanna be like this anymore
wanna go back, to how i used to be before
now i feel like i'm being ignored
like evil has been poured inside of me
feel like hardly anyone really loves me
[Verse 3]
I regret everything bad that i've done in my whole life
this year when i tried killin' myself with a kitchen knife
thought about suicide a lot felt my life was just shit
but wasn't stupid enough to actually attempt to do it
glad i didn't commit suicide so many crying tears i cried
had no strength felt too weak everything seemed to collide
felt so stressed out inside of me that i felt so much pain
thought about slitting my wrist veins over and over again
depression left me brain damaged emotinally changed
nervous stressed out thinkin' negatively left me deranged
i can't take this evil demon out thats trapped inside of me
this is not how i used to be no one can take it anymore from me
been broken down to debris i'm destroyin' my own life and soul
diggin' myself deeper and deeper inside of this deep hole
i'll try my best to get out without giving up
take my hand, and please lord, help me to pull myself up
[Chorus] x3
please forgive me lord
don't wanna be like this anymore
wanna go back, to how i used to be before
now i feel like i'm being ignored
like evil has been poured inside of me
feel like hardly anyone really loves me
feedback appreciated...
nicely done man keep it up. waitin 4 da audio 
