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Yesterday Was Here Again 2day

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Yesterday Was Here Again 2day

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 4th, '07, 07:25

Hate Is Fine, cuz I don't know what 2 Say This Time, like a snowman I Play With Lines
I'm not yur Basic Find, I took skill and Made It Mine, still no 1 cares if Matrix Rhymes
that guy, I'm Proud He Lies, theres Cloudy Skies, it's Raining By Choice
wanna Out Me try, why tha fuck do u want 2 hear tha Pain In My Voice
I've heard it 2 Often, have U Forgotten, I exist, I have, I Knew Tha Pride
I'm a Ghost who Posts tha Most, I Do Abide, I can finally say fuck Suicide
it's Now Gone, but 4 How Long, it creeps on tha Prowl Strong, I never Chose Fear
Oh Dear, it seems So Near, my future will Close Here, no I won't let u cry Those Tears
I might not be Hood Tuff, or Good Enuff, but I can Drop 4 Me, these are Not Yor Keys
I know what Hell Is, cuz I've Felt it, i Fell Quick, am I being 2 Selfish, have I Fought Poorly
only I will Bury Me, but only after I waste money on Therapy, 4 me this is my audio with Better Effects
my style Forever Reflects, Set Yur Reflex, Never Be Next, cuz I won't be remembered 4 Spectre Text
u know I'm Loco Lots, why is my Flow So Shot, sounding like Robocop, u ask, Lets Eval It Friends
I know, No Excuses, Tho Less Music, I won't get dissed 4 being born with a Cleft Pallette Again!
u don't have 2 Wonder Now, I might never be rich in tha Underground, but I'll Portray Wisdom Personified
off tha subject Foreplay Is Dumb, played out, More Say It's Done, I live 4 Days With Sun, Yur Wrongs Applied
2 my Whole Scheme of these Null Dreams, all my nightmares that hear Skulls Scream
I give my Bowl Green, like a Dope Fiend, then expand on tha net like a Full Screen

Ha ha ha they say it's what u make it, if u make it
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Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 5th, '07, 05:51

I'll give u my password actor, u fake bastard, u can take shots but it's still hate talk, I want some feed I need u 2 feel e-why, just give a real reply
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Postby JMG » Apr 5th, '07, 06:25

yeah and tommrow ur still gonna be wack
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Postby Xray » Apr 5th, '07, 12:10

nice shit but u needa audio this
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


New Track: The Nightmare
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Postby Rae » Apr 5th, '07, 16:08

Sajjad wrote:nice shit but u needa audio this
screename on Zune Social - HispanicLUVER

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I drink more than you, I party harder than you do, And my car is faster than yours too! RAWWRR!

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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 5th, '07, 16:13

the text is dope :smoking: keep up ur creativity
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 23:02

man rain, if you are any good at audio, and you start recording i'm gonna d/l your spits.
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Postby 4D » Apr 5th, '07, 23:06

That was great mate, the best by far I've seen you do. All the multies were cool and didn't seem too forced, and the big change for me was everything was saying something and actually not rhymes for the sake of rhymes. Awesome stuff man, best rhyme I've read on here in ages.
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Postby Kez » Apr 6th, '07, 03:14

You're good with multis Rain but you need to start doing audio. No offense but you don't really get noticed much with texts. If you start doing audio good and you get good at it you will probably be one of the best on here, as you already have great rhymes.
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Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 6th, '07, 05:29

Alright I'll get u a new audio probably 2morrow, it'll probably be this drop here, theres needs 2 be anotha famous Cracka Rappa me or not... anyway I'll do my thang regardless, any1 wanna help with a beat as picking them isn't my stong point, maybe something shady related?
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 6th, '07, 05:34

i think you and an eminem beat would fit well.. anyways good luck and when it drops i'll make sure to feed.
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