another mission to do

[Ka0t1c]

i've got another mission to do
but not until a couple more days
although something may change this news
im goin away so soon after i made it through
all of those who hate our troops
i was called out of my rank to move
then i had been told to aid
and let my stay flow smooth
thats how most of us get paid
we raid on parades, throw your grenades, we shoot
or we could take a boot to a face to mute them from sayin their "hoots"
it aint for amusement, don't paint me a mutant but i can't wait, its due
we dictate the humans like they're alien food (we takeover n destroy)

[James R.]

I didnt like the lines that really didnt have a rhyme to them, but overall it had a nice purpose. The rhyming was basic but got your point across which is all I can ask for. Maybe try some basic multies next time just to upgrade yourself a little bit. 6.5/10