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Postby James R. » May 4th, '07, 02:20

Aight so I'm just writin a punchline song. This is the 1st verse of it. Tell me what you think.

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Postby Tash8 » May 4th, '07, 03:20

god damn, your amazing :D

fuck you gotta teach me some skills man :D
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Postby IceAxe » May 4th, '07, 03:23

that was some tight shit...some nice mulits keep it up James
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Postby Hadez » May 4th, '07, 03:25

propz man, good work :smoking:
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Postby James R. » May 4th, '07, 14:06

Thanks for the replies... Anybody else?
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Postby 4D » May 4th, '07, 15:26

Defintely got some tight lyrical abilities mate, I like the stillborn line, sick in a good way, lol. :smoking:
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Postby James R. » May 4th, '07, 16:28

Haha thanks man. Yeah I consider myself to be very talented, but I always got room to improve, and I think I got a relatively unique style too. Thanks everyone for the comments and feed.
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Postby Ka0t1c » May 4th, '07, 19:49

i know you can do much more better.... that was nice tho
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 4th, '07, 19:53

u r in da tourney too ryt?
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Postby James R. » May 4th, '07, 23:09

Yeah I'm doin the tournament thing. Thanks.
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