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lost my"SELF"

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lost my"SELF"

Postby shady_soul » May 4th, '07, 07:16

Lord!!! Ultimately

I now realized when I deeply analysed,

That I aint got no possession once I had,

That once was so full of myself,

In all these guises n
INFATUATION

Me Against tha World
with nothin' ta lose
it's just me against tha world
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Postby James R. » May 4th, '07, 14:02

Sounds more like a poem than lyrics but that's deep. I haven't anything like that on here before, or anywhere for that matter. Really impressed, very poetic, if you could make that a song it would own Jesus Walks (thats just my prediction). Good shit man.
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Postby shady_soul » May 5th, '07, 08:34

thanks bru'. yeah i don't write lyrics or rhymes much, i write more poems. really appreciate.
anymore, anyone.........upping//
peace
INFATUATION

Me Against tha World
with nothin' ta lose
it's just me against tha world
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