I dont need you

[Rae]

I realized something new today
I cant always have my way
But I will always try to display
That I don

[James R.]

Very poetic. I like it. Reads more like an R&B type song rather than a rap song, but I definitely wanna hear it recorded. I'm not sure of the flow cuz I'm not really sure how to read it, the structure makes it a little difficult to tell when I should pause and when I should read through. Once it's recorded I'll be able to leave some better feed.

Do me a favor and check out my drops, mainly the song Me and You, since it's a song for the ladies

[Rae]

Very poetic. I like it. Reads more like an R&B type song rather than a rap song, but I definitely wanna hear it recorded. I'm not sure of the flow cuz I'm not really sure how to read it, the structure makes it a little difficult to tell when I should pause and when I should read through. Once it's recorded I'll be able to leave some better feed.

Do me a favor and check out my drops, mainly the song Me and You, since it's a song for the ladies

well i wrote it b/c my bf broke up with me on Thurs. lol. kinda tryin to let him know that i love him but if i keep tellin myself that i dont need him. then one day i wont. lol kinda dumb i know.
but yeah the whole part of not knowing were to read through a line and stuff. i understand there are alot of parts where i stop in the middle of the lines.

and ima def. check out your song

thanks for the feedback hunn!

[James R.]

Naw it's not dumb, in a lot of ways thats all you can do. Emotions aint smtn you can just turn off unfortunately lol. I kinda figured it was a fresh wound because the emotion (which I failed to mention before) was very real in the song and it really brought it to life for me.

Also thanks for checkin out my song, glad you enjoyed it. If you ever wanna get down for a boy/girl collabo get at me

[Rae]

Naw it's not dumb, in a lot of ways thats all you can do. Emotions aint smtn you can just turn off unfortunately lol. I kinda figured it was a fresh wound because the emotion (which I failed to mention before) was very real in the song and it really brought it to life for me.

Also thanks for checkin out my song, glad you enjoyed it. If you ever wanna get down for a boy/girl collabo get at me

thanks for the great feed!

and np your song was great! no doubt.

so yeah ... and the next time i get some freetime i will hit you up for that collab.

[Flamez]

I like it rae good job

[Rae]

thanks hunn.