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Postby Ka0t1c » May 11th, '07, 22:14

all these thoughts are clottin up my vision
but i can't cut em off
why listen?
its because im lost
and im wishin i caught what's missin
thats the reason i got this mission
not to be stuck in fiction
which has brought a lot of friction
to this spot
im pinched enough
so i must get tough
or a victim i'll become to the Government's system
call me bluff, soft but never tell me im dumb
theres really a plot to my intentions
plus the cost has jumped more inches i should mention
and ever since i've been involved my life's fell to the trenches
but also i've felt my friendship's grow a stronger bond, well stickin
helpin me go far beyond the fences cuz i love
no boundaries n less limits
and if ya found me, i'd express the sense of it
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby JMG » May 11th, '07, 22:45

good shit the flow is off in some of the spots but lyrics are good keep it up
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Postby Rain Matrix » May 12th, '07, 00:46

nice I liked this it flowed well without over doin it, u always kill it
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