
i know its not that great but tell me what you think.. i'm gonna audio this btw

***still editing this song***
[Chorus] x2
Straight From the streets of Southern Cali from Anaheim
thats where i came from where i became a true emcee
those bitches hating on me you see you got no shit on me
[Verse 1]
guess who's back once again racing the twenty-four hour clock
around the block with a glock in my hand with no safety lock
as i walk through the streets screaming fuck the world like 2pac
got this rap shit on lock when i grab the mic the light shines bright
ignite excite the crowd with the sick tight shit i write every night
never stage fright ever but always causing fist fights every time
spittin' ill rhymes sick flowing creating verbal lyrical crimes
don't get outta line i'm sick from the mind throwing punchlines
combine intertwine my fiery rhymez that i dangerously design
tha world is mine in this rap game i got fame with my sizzling name
a rapper who became known as flamez thats what i became
ain't the same as the rest i'm unique ain't lame i'll lyrically slaughter you too
take my cock down your throat and choke till' your face turns blue
till my last breath till death i'm a rap if you hating on me well fuck you
[Chorus] x2
Straight From the streets of Southern Cali from Anaheim
thats where i came from where i became a true emcee
those bitches hating on me you see you got no shit on me
[Verse 2]
fuck the bush administration fuckin' pussies with monkey looking faces
that lil dumb stupid faggot racist who's keeps fillin' our country with disgraces
tearin' em' apart thats why his wife broke heart cuz bush is gay he a hoe
can't fuck his wife thats why she got a knife and chopped his dick right off you know
fo sho ain't gonna concede i'm a proceed succeed aggrieve achieve my goals fo to be on top
best believe you can't stop me whether a big shot or not all i need for you to be dead is one shot
if you think i'm wack n' suck when rappin' well check again i'm expose ya weak spots
well you might wanna have a listen to mims this is why i'm hot cuz that shit flops
i'm creatin' shit makin' it complex more perplex show me some respect i'm Malcolm x
you bitches request expect to have unprotected sex well let me see do i accept or reject
but fuck rednecks i'll pass next!
[Chorus] x2
Straight From the streets of Southern Cali from Anaheim
thats where i came from where i became a true emcee
those bitches hating on me you see you got no shit on me
[Verse 3]
I'm Tryin' to get to that elite level on top but can't seem to reach it
i keep fallin' back gotta admit it i'm not even close to it not one bit
feels like i'm not permitted to reach it but one this is i won't quit
no matter how many pits i fall in i'm a get up and keep trying
till i'm dying put to rest thats the day it ends with people crying
but until then i'm a keep fryin' enemies with the skills i possess
i'm blessed till death with finesse progressin' forward with success
you don't wanna mess with me unless you got a plan to put me down
don't even try unless you wanna be the laughing clown of the town
i don't back down fore' you know u be laying flat on the ground
the people which who i get down be representin' the brown
a vato wearing the royal crown from southern cali soy 100% Mexicano
proud to be a Hispano Latino who puttin' it down for the Chicanos
[Chorus] x4
Straight From the streets of Southern Cali from Anaheim
thats where i came from where i became a true emcee
those bitches hating on me you see you got no shit on me
feedback appreciated