Unable to Compose

[Tash8]

Hello,

I was trying to write my verse for my collab with sajjad, but it wasn't working out well, I made like 6 different verse and they all were terrible so then I decided to take a break from it and I wrote this because I couldn't flow to that beat.

I was writing this verse, but it felt like I was fighting this curse,
burst, harrased trashed, or shit
cause the words together hadn't matched or fit
my spit, didn't flow to the beat and it di-dn't
come from my noble heart, a woeful start
to my entertaining and diverse lines, the worst time
because I was hoping my spirit would compose
lyrical wows, to the ones who hear it flow
blow, up wishing it would be spirtual and divine
eye's flyin', and I would be the next lyrical Einstein

Basically, What I was trying to say is I wanted to make my collab verse really good because I know that Sajjad is an amazing rapper and I wanted to step to his level.

Please Feed,
Tash8

[Hadez]

got some nice multi's. not really sure wut to say. pretty good i guess for a no reason at all verse

[Tash8]

got some nice multi's. not really sure wut to say. pretty good i guess for a no reason at all verse

Thanks, yea I didn't write this for anything, but I like to write to write plus I expanded my vocab because I was checking words in dictionary and shit.

more feed please

[Flamez]

even though was bout nothin' it was good i liked it

[Tash8]

even though was bout nothin' it was good i liked it

Thanks man, gotta let your emotion out someway. Even though the last few lines weren't true lol

[Xray]

DAmn thats a dope verse man and if you dont like the beat find a beat that you can flow on and hit me up with the link

[Tash8]

DAmn thats a dope verse man and if you dont like the beat find a beat that you can flow on and hit me up with the link

thanks, can ya get on msn man? we can talk about it.

[Tash8]

yo, more feed please!

[James R.]

That was pretty good, some real good multies in there, definitely written to a beat because of the structure of double rhymes in one line. The topic was interestingly approached. I thought I was gonna hear another bland writers block song, but you surprised me. Nice

[Tash8]

^ thanks man

more feed

[IceAxe]

got some nice multi's. not really sure wut to say. pretty good i guess for a no reason at all verse

that's more or less what I had to say

[4D]

Basically, What I was trying to say is I wanted to make my collab verse really good because I know that Sajjad is an amazing rapper and I wanted to step to his level.

Please Feed,
Tash8

Bite my rhymes man, you'll nail him to the floor, lol. J/K


I actually like the concept of writing about not being able to write, it's something we all go through man, we can't be in a creative mood all the time. I would suggest listening on your mp3 player some of the best Emcee's and have a pad n pen ready.

[Tash8]

haha true that fordie, but i dont' want to be the next k-block lol

[4D]

haha true that fordie, but i dont' want to be the next k-block lol

Yeah, lol. V-Dog was the mother of all biters though.