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Postby dookie » May 18th, '07, 01:05

im sat in my room staring at the wall, dad next door in a silent room, i can tell hes depressed and my mums the one causing it. with her new boyf in her new house still suing him

anyways

this is my head...only a draft

as i sat in my room i painted a picture, a picture without any paint
with angles in link.. with tangles ..a scripture tainted with a penless ink
a mess is what id think, but a cover? fighter? ...no a lover.. im good id think.
and as i dabbed in the watercolours the blues blacks and pink
with my picture of scripture my scripture of ink
my chest became sudden as the ink formed a face
the woman, the womb, the painter of the picture
the bitch with the pen,
the pen for my scripture the shoe to my lace, her face.
Whats the use between death and glory?
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Postby dookie » May 19th, '07, 03:36

thanx for the feed
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Postby Global » May 19th, '07, 03:41

It wasent the best but still good :thumbsup:

Keep' em' coming :happy:
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