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Postby xariuss » Nov 2nd, '05, 22:45

(OLD BIT)
I don't like to fight back
i would rather grab a knife and raid the bike racks
it's not that im scared, it's just no ones got my back
i'm a phycho, it's known that i might crack
an athiest, who's got his sights at
the insituation of retard's who all wear white hats
i belong there but i'm not like that
i'm not going to kiss your ass so back off you white cat's
fuck crack im off that
i started to cough black , vomit and grey plaque
so as is said, i'm about to go now
bout to throw out my own ass out this flow now..



(NEW BIT)
people just don't have the right to offend me
pre-tend to be sombody who wouldn't de-fend me
i'm ment to be mentally deadly
but wait see i'm more then what im just ment to be
this lyrical talent was sent to me
to express these subliminal contraver-sey
words and mentality on this earth see
so don't let the birth of me be the dirt you see
dont look down on me and make a clown of me
or i might stab you and take you down the sea
in a body bag, many think it's obsurd to see
somebody get stabbed when their talkin shit you see
it's all about respect it's all re-ality
you can't judge on their clothes but their mentality..
So back off you old fake m.c's
who rap about just trying to get some peace
the only way you'd be the death of me
if you were the devil and took my breath from me
now i'm going to fly before i break this screen
now everybody knows the fake things i've seen
from friends foes, all the depressing woes
of this and that, never gunna grab the gat
you're never going to be able to lab this rat
so let's go now, yo about to go
about to blow this show off the road now...
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Postby Inzanity » Nov 2nd, '05, 23:43

yea I liked it. It's much better then the first one
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Postby Cartman » Nov 3rd, '05, 20:16

Aha now thats what i was talkin bout homes! Pretty well done...pretty fuckin well done! I like I like ..so you up for a few bars more?!
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Postby 4D » Nov 3rd, '05, 20:21

Very good man, you`ve got talent, keep workin on it!! ;)
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Postby xariuss » Nov 4th, '05, 05:11

thanks alot for the comments, yeah i put another one up, i just write em as i post when i'm in the mood.. ummm yeah thanks for the replies, it means alot to me, as it seems this is the only way to do anything these days, if u know what i meen..
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