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Postby Hadez » May 24th, '07, 08:13

i liked both verses :smoking:


im out of mind, i mean my mind is out of me,
climbin a church tower, readin devils anatomy,
findin the single family, athesism the enemy,
drinkin about a bottle of acid meth, and hennasy

that was my favorite :smoking:
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Postby randomghost » May 24th, '07, 08:35

hot verses man
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Postby Ka0t1c » May 24th, '07, 09:16

i don't like the flows but there were key words to keep for a better verse, just take your time on it more for a good song
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby Global » May 24th, '07, 09:32

Hotly versus
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