Quick Rhyme...

[RoleModel]

Writing's a creative dedication
which causes scatological inflation, word abreviation 'n unconscious... hesitation
n on ocassion
makes me forget my medication
it's a process of will
with incredible skill
n now n then to help you can eat an inedable pill
it's like mentally climing an unclimable hill
your never quite satisfied
n can't stop writing until your brain's realised
that this is as good as it gets
and then it forgets of what it just thought
because of the dodgey marjurana you just smoked rolled n bought
no.... bought rolled n smoked
COUGH!
I just chocked, this shit really is strong
time to put this spliff down n move onto the bong

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this sort of stuff goes in creative writing

[4D]

What Bar said.

And not bad at all man, good vocab and I like your rhyme style