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"A quick spit"-Feed please

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"A quick spit"-Feed please

Postby Aft3rmath » Jun 24th, '07, 00:55

Walk'n through these streets/
Sweat'n from dis heat, I compose da beat's/
Most bitches sit and rest their feet/
while my games keep bring'n defeat/
upon these posers, weak knees/
my words destroy ya thoughts and ya very dreams/
time to show yee my words are bigger than they seem/

Feed please, its just a random spit.
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Re: "A quick spit"-Feed please

Postby sinemm » Jun 24th, '07, 11:48

well it feels like its not finished yet..add sth more..prolong it abit..it'll be cooler..that aint bad now tho ;)
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