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Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 13th, '07, 02:13

- you might think im outta my mind
and start countin my drinks
to see how many you'd find
but really you're blind
cuz im bringin you signs
that i am bound for my shine
so no more time i can sink but survive

now you could follow in line
or doubt what im bout just like
im fallin behind the crowd when i rhyme
but in reality these mountains i climb
and im prolly gonna be around til i end in my prime

and i always count on a call by alla the friends of mine
to encounter the gals who unwind, not just any kind
because i couldn't keep inside taller walls and sleep or hide
because right now i need a route which will lead to bigger heights
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: u might think..

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 02:14

Yeah expect some rly great feedback.
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Re: u might think..

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '07, 02:20

Kojack wrote:Yeah expect some rly great feedback.


especially when i never see him giving feedback to other shits
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Re: u might think..

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 02:23

Tash8 wrote:
Kojack wrote:Yeah expect some rly great feedback.


especially when i never see him giving feedback to other shits


Love it when im right.

Yep mr Chaotic. In this place if u want ur cunt licked, u gotta suck a few dicks first. Get it?
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Re: u might think..

Postby James R. » Aug 13th, '07, 07:00

The rhyming was so simple I think it took me back to preschool. Up the complexity. Stop sticking with the same rhyme throughout the entire piece. It's ok when it's a string of rhymes, but not like.
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