off my chest 4 good

[Rain Matrix]

I'll do it tha hard way, at least thats what tha scars say, on this dark day
another numb feeling, is it done stealing, me from sealing any more heart ache

I stay reserved, they be first, that made me work, towards my final goal
of all things on this crazy earth, I stand on tha shaky turf, like rhymes'll show

my brain prison, where rains missing, tha sane mission, burning like a furnace test
even if yur set ta flow perpetual, tha worth never shows, come back drop hermit's text

damn right I'm tense kids, if u don't understand what tha message is sent with, it's senseless
that's why life seems rented, when it's vented, through clenched fists, I turn it in2 words hence this

as long as I have my desire, only I can retire my keys fire, I'm not 1 to hold truth back
if only friendship was endless, like an old news cast, remember I'm tha 1 who told u that

after death survival, depends on yur master check yur bible, if u want 2 get spiritual
find ya miracle u'll never mirror this tho, I'm far 2 lyrical, cry in my cold shadow a tear sickle

I fall down and watch tha years ripple, were fickle, it's a demented fight
no 1 wants 2 bring their vice 2 tha light, so I write cuz it can't be attempted twice

[James R.]

The 1st 4 lines were just kinda there. The rhyming in the 4th line (rhymes'll show) was pretty weak for you, I think you could have come up with something better than that. Lines 5 and 6 were good until the very end with the hermit's text part cuz I'm not quite sure I understand what you're saying. 7 and 8 were the best by leaps and bounds. The rest was at your normal level of skill and the closing 2 lines were pretty hot man. Keep it up.

[Rain Matrix]

I fell back a lil due 2 unexpected situations, and stevethatruth, that line in my sig is just 1 I like tha most but I'll change it if u got a better 1 I've wrote