flamez...

[Flamez]

do you wanna play games with someone who spits out blistering flamez
like if i became spyro the dragon smokin' u out with my sweltering name
takin' aim strikin' various targets like if i were playing a pinball game
its a bloody shame you will never be the same once i hit the jackpot
i'll become torrid hot havin' u blocked out of my life like a blood clot
whether you like it or not my lyrics will shock and rock your socks
it'll antilock inside your mind makin' you go like cuckoo clocks
i'm like a gangsta takin' over every block so don't play with me
when i'm stinging worst than a hornet bee droppin' u to your knees

[C-Game]

liked it man.. the only part that the flow went off was da 3rd line.. u had done a kool transition from pinball game to bloody shame but didnt continue with it ..

if u had somethin that would have rhymed with jackpot in da middle of da 4th line it could have maintained a good flow IMO

anyway da rhymes are good as usuall
multies are lackin ..

i liked da spyro line

[James R.]

It was decent. the rock your socks line was sooooo cheesy man. you gotta be more creative than that. overall the game references were pretty cool. the flow in the 3rd line was awkward when I read over it. you had some almost mutlies in there and it kinda bothered me cuz i wanted to say them in a way that would make them multies lol.

[Flamez]

thanx for the feed C-game and James lol i know i don't really do multies but they just don't come to me but i'll work on that i know that line was cheesy lol but just couldn't come up with something else haha and thanx for the feed both of you..