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Illusion

Postby ek_iz_backk » Aug 25th, '07, 03:45

its about being trapped and facing reality its a short write

sitting at the beach corner
rocks lie underneath my thighs
picturing a beautiful girl by my side

imagining that I'm rich and healthy
everybody getting along in my family
the future is awesome to me

the waves turned heavy
as the weather was in motion
the splash that struck me
i was awakened from this illusion
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Re: Illusion

Postby Requiem » Aug 25th, '07, 04:35

hey man, it aint bad,
but if ya feel sad,
take a viagra tab



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Re: Illusion

Postby CaptivatingVokalz » Aug 25th, '07, 12:47

lol at the comment above me. This was short and simple...and so cute! I liked it but I hate sad endings...I want happily ever after dammit!! :(
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