Transitional Phase

[Rain Matrix]

it's so sane 2 live life with no chains, I flow frames into production
even with slow gains, most of my foes slain, like I can tell ya nothing

anyway lately it's this crazy chick that makes me sick, but I hold my head high
my body is drained, my pride is stained, what more can I say b4 I'm bled dry

I get in touch with, feelings like I love this, my life's fading out see dye gone
I'll crush it till I kick tha bucket, I coming 4 my judges, tha subject u rely on

I jumped into all this, now my skin crawls bitch, what did I do
it burdens me, guess tha weight, estimate, I'm thinking why lose

little miss sexy wrecks me check please, it's happening 2 fast
lets see as emotion get set free, I really am still glad u asked

tha accidents, ask tha men, are u ready, u met me, and I smiled
over a permanent frown, tha curtains went down, a end 2 my trials

4 now I'm in good heath, but a confirmation would help, I might need a mind medic tho
whatever, ya never said it was a problem, when we were talking, now my rhymes let it go

are u here 2 kill this pain, I wonder where will it rain, I'm still with brains over a skillets flames, like tragic events
my movement has ta be drasticly, will my savage means bring about tha illest change, life has it's sequence

[C-Game]

decent drop rain

da last 4 bars were way off structure and da syllable count was too high in it..
always write to a beat man....

and da content was somethin i have never seen frm u before...

so for that

da multies were there
guess tha weight, estimate <-- nice...

da flow was good in da begnin ..

everythin worked out oki...good job