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love song

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 28th, '07, 19:25

it's beating me up inside
cuz between us, is a long ride

we must meet down the line
cuz i need you this time

you mean a lot in my life
you bring me suprise

which is the reason that i'm
feelin just like i think i should write

see it's because what you leave is some type
of healing, it's nice

you're the piece where i'm sliced
n a lot's to see like there's light

cuz you're my key to my kite
for me to egnite freely my might

im your King, you're my wife
but no strings you provide

i really believe you are mine
cuz you're stealing me by proceeding the signs

or you're leading me blind cuz you keep me beside
but it would be teasing my mind

oh please don't rewind, you'd put me in a bind
and that's too easy you'd find

i'm reachin out, climb like monkeys do vines
and i'd teach you to shine n treat you so kind...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: love song

Postby J Roc » Aug 29th, '07, 08:08

ya lines were a bit to short...but it hada good flow to it :y:
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