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Child Soldiers

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Child Soldiers

Postby Jay_LP1 » Aug 29th, '07, 17:45

Well this song is dedicated to all the Child Soldiers of Africa . If u don't know what they are then google it.

So in this song a child soldier is talking to his mother and telling her how he is feeling after killing people and what he wants to do . Then in the third verse mother replies to the child.

And plzz just don't say it's nice and all that . a lil big review will be appreciated. And also tell me if you can find any emotions in the song.

Intro
Mama you listening to me ma?? Ma I want to tell u somethin

Verse 1
I'm tired of killing people , my soul is getting mad
I'm falling down flat as I kill with my lads
these are all the facts and as my memory fades
hug me in ur arms ma , I'm not feeling safe
I wake up in the morning with a gun in my hand
I wonder what I was and now where I stand
they call me mister devil as I kill them all day
I think I'm a devil on this earth with a face
the leader becomes angry if I ever refuse to kill
he told me that I'll love to rape ur sis
and treat her like a sex slave just like ur mother
to increase ur pain , I'll shoot down ur brother
this is not right ma , this is not right
they also killed my dad when he decided not to fight
I'm not gonna fight now , listen to me ma now
I wanna I wanna...


[Chorus x 2]
Listen to me mama , I wanna be alone
Don't wanna live here , I want to leave this home
and fly from this pain , like an eagle in the sky
with wings fly high and with full of pride

Verse 2
the people I killed come into my dreams
they ask me why I killed why I disturbed their peace
what is this peace ma? is it somethin we can eat??
coz I want to eat food , I'm tired of smoking weeds
the face of the small kid that I killed yesterday
came in front of me but I tried to run away
his eyes full of blood were looking for some light
he told me he was 13 and wanted to live his life
how could I tell him , I'm also of his age
my life also has been taken by people full of hate
I was supposed to play hide and seek with my friends
now I'm playing with the government with a gun in my hand
I'm tired of killing people , I wanna go to school
like those white kids with new clothes and shoes
and become a doctor to give them life
to fullfill their dreams and give some light


[Chorus x 2]
Listen to me mama , I wanna be alone
Don't wanna live here , I want to leave this home
and fly from this pain , like an eagle in the sky
with wings fly high and with full of pride

Verse 3
Listen to me Son , you can't go to school
coz we live in third world where people act like fools
here people kill people for religion and money
they say they are saving , but to me it looks funny
saving from whom?? saving from our brothers??
we used to be together for this land which is our mother
and peace means somethin when people live with love
but for us it's like a dream coz we ain't got no love
so u've to terrorize son , u've to fight
for ur little sis and for her bright life
u can't run away , every place is the same
from asia to africa , people are just insane
now come to ur mama's arms , as we've to pray
and let me give u a hug so that u can feel safe
safe in a place where on every step is pain

[Chorus x 2]
Listen to me son , I know u wanna be alone
u don't wanna live here , u want to leave this home
and fly from this pain , like an eagle in the sky
with wings fly high and with full of pride
Jay_LP1
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