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DUN

Postby sicilyzbest » Sep 4th, '07, 04:03

the ace of diamonds, and the ace of spades
double up the big blind, make my raise
its gettin to ya mind, and ya patience fades
i got the face of the agents the matrix made
im countin out his chips,just in case he stayed
quiverin his lip.... and his face afraid
he said all in, im callin...lets make my day
he had an eight of spades, and an eight of hearts
he thought that he was bright but i made it dark
the flop had to drop, all the same, were hearts
got a feelin in my gut, heart rate is sparked
time for the turn, its a spade, thank god
but what are the odds, of a flush on the river
my body aint cold but im catchin a shiver
to the pole we can go, lets roll to the river
i can tell you only this,chips can grow, mine got bigger
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Re: DUN

Postby Kojack » Sep 4th, '07, 09:39

good, i liked much, but where is what i asked you to do?
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Postby sicilyzbest » Sep 4th, '07, 20:37

haha in the process
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Re: DUN

Postby Inzanity » Sep 8th, '07, 01:53

a very unusual concept but it was great I liked it nice job :y:
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