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bored so wrot this..

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bored so wrot this..

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Oct 3rd, '07, 09:50

Jottin' down these words like if i were shootin' down birds
sprayin' silver bullets like if it were a herd split in twothirds
you absurd my words ain't slurred your eye vision's blurred
what the fuck just occured i don't know your obscured
i've lured you into my unsecured trap door its rest assured
you ain't matured i'm an entrepreneur meanin' serious business
this pimptastic makin' loads of cash money in the music business
¤°~ Jose ~¤°©
 

Re: bored so wrot this..

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 3rd, '07, 18:47

¤°~ Jose ~¤°© wrote:you ain't matured i'm an entrepreneur meanin' serious business
this pimptastic makin' loads of cash money in the music business


okay drop
nice finish, that rhyme set still shows
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