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off the top of the dome

Postby patwivo » Oct 3rd, '07, 04:37

bow down when ya see me, i bring the ruckus, im grimy and greezy
laid back, breezy, i aint a stiff like you bitch, i take two hits, this my new shit
where the fuck you been, you most not know, you have no chance up against wivo
im hot, i'll give you the feva, even if ya face was blue, nobody could see ya
you aint got shit, but me--im clever, and if u ever head my way, ya head'll be severed
you'll never be up to my level, flames singe ya ass hairs, call me the devil
a rebel---mutilatin foes, why waste lyrics on you frilly ass hoes
chilly and cold, ya betta stand still--freeze, when i come through ya betta get on ya knees-bow down biotch
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Re: off the top of the dome

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 3rd, '07, 18:43

well this was better than I've seen from u
has some okay lines
keep dropping
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Re: off the top of the dome

Postby patwivo » Oct 3rd, '07, 19:55

Rain Matrix wrote:well this was better than I've seen from u
has some okay lines
keep dropping


thanx rain
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