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2nd Guessin' Questions

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2nd Guessin' Questions

Postby -[Zach]- » Oct 6th, '07, 08:24

I’m 2nd guessin questions I should ask but I want them answered
Stess in the back of my mind all the time, growin like a cancer
Plaster my pain on everything I touch
I waz raised 2 get blazed n bust
I’m losin sleep over wat people do 2 me
N I’m havin dreams of people shootin me
Should I pray 4 my safety or let god take me
I don’t kno anymore, I’m just goin crazy
All my homiez r so easy 2 turn they back on me
So why do I think they would never pull a mack on me?
I’m only 16 but quickly getting used 2 the game
Watch 4 cops n keep the glock cocked, all 4 the street fame
Last edited by -[Zach]- on Oct 7th, '07, 03:46, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Not Sure What To Call It

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 6th, '07, 14:14

I enjoyed this one alot

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Re: Not Sure What To Call It

Postby 4D » Oct 6th, '07, 17:04

Good job man, scan through the lyrics and pick some of the coolest ones for your title, I think "2nd guessin' questions" is a good one. :y:
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Re: Not Sure What To Call It

Postby -[Zach]- » Oct 7th, '07, 03:46

Rain Matrix wrote:I enjoyed this one alot

KUDOS :y:


thanks man. i've read some of the things you've wrote and they are always incredible so that means a lot coming from you.


4D wrote:Good job man, scan through the lyrics and pick some of the coolest ones for your title, I think "2nd guessin' questions" is a good one. :y:


thanks for the feedback. and i like that as a title. i'm going to use that.
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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